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PostSubject: untitled (dark)   untitled (dark) Icon_minitimeSun Feb 17, 2013 2:05 am

In the darkness of night
Shadows stray and hide
Death knocks on your door
As swift as a blade
That takes your immortal soul.
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Wolfblood

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PostSubject: Re: untitled (dark)   untitled (dark) Icon_minitimeSun Feb 17, 2013 2:10 am

I dont think your poem stinks. It short and to the point, some of mine are exactly the same way. I like it.
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Cyrax

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PostSubject: Re: untitled (dark)   untitled (dark) Icon_minitimeSun Feb 17, 2013 2:14 am

I like it.

A little too cheerful, but still...
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PostSubject: Re: untitled (dark)   untitled (dark) Icon_minitimeSun Feb 17, 2013 4:46 am

It's not dark at all... Love it
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